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donjuan678 Co-Owner
Posts : 59 Join date : 2009-08-25
| Subject: Donjuan's Creations Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:11 pm | |
| a lil something for you guys to enjoy 1st creature.......... Jambala The Brute( generic past creature warrior) stats: 75 courage 100 power 15 wisdom 50 speed elements: fire and earth ability: intimidate power 40 recklessness 10 if the opposing engaged creature won initiative Jambala gains fire and earth 5 and an additional recklessness 5 Quote:what he lacks in brain power he more than makes it up through brute strength energy(srry bout that completely forgot): 95
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donjuan678 Co-Owner
Posts : 59 Join date : 2009-08-25
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:28 pm | |
| Card #2
LOCATION: VALLEY OF THE FALLEN(ultra Rare) Initiative: Scanned energy Ability: your creature gains 5 energy for each card in your general discard pile Quote: their bones may have faded away with the sands of time, but their memories will forever remain in our hearts Unique
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lior123 Giganto Legend
Posts : 369 Join date : 2009-08-26 Location : somewhere in Asia :P
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:38 pm | |
| i like the basic idea of this location but there is one problem which makes it overpowered it only affects your creature while it should affect both engaged creatures cause it's a location | |
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donjuan678 Co-Owner
Posts : 59 Join date : 2009-08-25
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:41 pm | |
| yeah i thought i was over powering but thates why its unique and ultra rare | |
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donjuan678 Co-Owner
Posts : 59 Join date : 2009-08-25
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:53 pm | |
| Card#3 TRIX THE SILENT
mipedian royal elite
elements earth and air stats 75c/55p/50w/110s/65e ability strike 15 expend: air trix gains outperform speed 10 untargetable
Quote: trust not your own shadow for it might not be your own | |
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lior123 Giganto Legend
Posts : 369 Join date : 2009-08-26 Location : somewhere in Asia :P
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:17 pm | |
| that one is overpowered too... you should make it expand air: gain outperform speed 5! (not 10, 10 is overpowered) and then you have 2 options: 1. lower the stats or 2. remove earth in my opinion this card is cool but very overpowered btw i really like your flavour texts | |
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doggo12 Grunt
Posts : 37 Join date : 2009-08-27
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:24 pm | |
| Its not overpowering, its just like lyssta but you expand air, you lose something for the ability | |
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BlackThunda Clan Owner
Posts : 439 Join date : 2009-02-23 Age : 32 Location : Massachusetts
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Fri Sep 11, 2009 6:56 pm | |
| The only thing i think is overpowered here is the location. It should instead read...
If you lost initiative ure engaged creature gains 10 energy for each creature in the general discard pile.
If you won initiative i dont think u really need the rediculous extra amount of energy possible here.
However all in all nice cards! | |
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donjuan678 Co-Owner
Posts : 59 Join date : 2009-08-25
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Mon Sep 14, 2009 8:38 am | |
| card #4
Nh'oj The Ancient( generic past Muge) 80c/45p/105w/35s/65e elements: earth 2 mugic counters ability: 3mc bring back a past creature in your discard pile to an open space on the board Nh'oj may use mugic counters from other muge's that you control use this ability only once per turn
card text:"rush not in to battle for the war shall be long only through surviving it will you truly prevail" | |
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lior123 Giganto Legend
Posts : 369 Join date : 2009-08-26 Location : somewhere in Asia :P
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:47 am | |
| another great card of your donjuan! but you should make the stats a bit lower cause he's a muge | |
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BlackThunda Clan Owner
Posts : 439 Join date : 2009-02-23 Age : 32 Location : Massachusetts
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Mon Sep 14, 2009 1:34 pm | |
| I like him! only suggestion is lower is energy to an average of 55 | |
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donjuan678 Co-Owner
Posts : 59 Join date : 2009-08-25
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:58 am | |
| card#5
WARHAMMER OF THE MEEK (super rare) creatures with 40 or less scanned energy gain 20 energy and 20 to all diciplines creatures with 40 or more scanned energy lose 20 energy and 20 to all diciplines
card text: is the weak are now strong and the strong are now weak who truly is the best? | |
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lior123 Giganto Legend
Posts : 369 Join date : 2009-08-26 Location : somewhere in Asia :P
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:15 am | |
| wow i like the idea! just 1 thing i don't get, is it a creature or a mugic? | |
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BlackThunda Clan Owner
Posts : 439 Join date : 2009-02-23 Age : 32 Location : Massachusetts
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Wed Sep 16, 2009 12:00 pm | |
| sounds like a battlegear hence the WARHAMMER. also the second ability isnt nessacery because if u dont have 40 or less energy u automatically cant pull off the ability of the battlegear. and nobody would put it on some1 who cant pull it off. Also nobody would put it on some1 with higher than 45 energy cause it would make then suck. this is a battlegear for the week such as melke. | |
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donjuan678 Co-Owner
Posts : 59 Join date : 2009-08-25
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Wed Sep 16, 2009 12:57 pm | |
| exactly this battle gear is meant to reinforce the weaker yet useful creature in ones deck take the old lore for example who would love to have a muge that can fight in the same class as your other creatures | |
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lior123 Giganto Legend
Posts : 369 Join date : 2009-08-26 Location : somewhere in Asia :P
| Subject: Re: Donjuan's Creations Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:57 pm | |
| oh it's a battlegear XD in that case, maybe it should start the game face up | |
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